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when I was simple

or perhaps complex yet smaller

a system instead of interconnections

that finding cracks in the surface

spread outward

an inky pool of 

things we cannot clean

the stain


now filling the void


we are bound to what

we can salvage

pulling artwork from our pockets

and flinging pictures into the air

hoping we can catch them

as they flutter to the ground

before they read the inky pool

that spreading

consumes all.

  • Question of

    i wrote this poem during a dark time in my life, but we have to remember times like that, right?

    • Yes
    • No
  • Question of

    sometimes we find the strength to over come, right?

    • Yes
    • No


What do you think?

10 Points

Written by DocAndersen

One fan, One team and a long time dream Go Cubs!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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  1. Nicely penned and you express your feeling very week, I was a very emotional teen and I always carried a notebook around with me at high school where I fitted down poems as they came to me, You know all the brokenhearted and longing for love stuff,


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