Halcombe Norilsk
This is the third part of a Challenge started by Kim. She wrote this: KIM
Once upon a time there was a family that lived in the forest.
And she invited Carol DM to continue the story who wrote the following: CAROL DM
This family was unlike other families. No people but a family of birds. The local park was the perfect spot for them to start their new family. Lots of food and water to drink. Many trees to hide in and build nests for their extended family.
Carol DM chose Ellie925 to continue the story and she wrote the following: ELLIE925
Spring was coming closer and closer each day, and the birds were busy building their new nests. Happy birdsongs were filling the air until something unusual happened – an unexpected visitor came to the forest…
Ellie 925 has selected me and I have written the following:
This unexpected visitor was a beautiful cuckoo, the only bird who does not have a proper nest as cuckoos steal the nests of other birds and lay their eggs in other nests. As a result, this family and other families of birds in the forest were utterly worried about this visit and the presence of this cuckoo called Malice. However, this cuckoo promised to behave correctly and as a matter of fact, Malice prepared a dinner party and invited the rest of the birds in the forest to introduce himself. The dinner party…
THE WHOLE STORY
Once upon a time there was a family that lived in the forest.
This family was unlike other families. No people but a family of birds. The local park was the perfect spot for them to start their new family. Lots of food and water to drink. Many trees to hide in and build nests for their extended family.
Spring was coming closer and closer each day, and the birds were busy building their new nests. Happy birdsongs were filling the air until something unusual happened – an unexpected visitor came to the forest…
This unexpected visitor was a beautiful cuckoo, the only bird who does not have a proper nest as cuckoos steal the nests of other birds and lay their eggs in other nests. As a result, this family and other families of birds in the forest were utterly worried about this visit and the presence of this cuckoo called Malice. However, this cuckoo promised to behave correctly and as a matter of fact, Malice prepared a dinner party and invited the rest of the birds in the forest to introduce himself. The dinner party…
And now I pick DocAndersen to continue it. What do you think of this story??
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Question of
Do you like the story???
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Yes
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No
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Question of
Will Doc Andersen accept the challenge???
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Yes
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No
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I am sad that the story didn’t move any further. I would have loved to know more about Malice. It would be nice if someone took it up and pushed it forward.
Yes, Malice is a very interesting character. But the story developed. I read more chapters.
The inspiration came from the previous pieces of writings.
Yes, I got the inspiration from what I read from the other users. Besides, I have always liked the story of cuckoos
The inspiration I came from reading the previous parts. This is what I can tell you.
I did not get inspiration from anyone, I thought a character called Malice would be good for the story because what is more, cuckoos are clever but in a malicious way. Do not overthink. Has something bad happened to you in Virily???
I am so sorry for you. I will try to treat you kindly
Cuckoos regularly visit our garden and their favourite fruit is Noni.
Amazing, but what is noni??? Ok, I have searched for noni on Google, I do not think this fruit is in my country Spain. Thanks a lot for your comment.
This is really wonderful job you have done , thank you for sharing
Thank you, thank you very much.
Beautiful Story indeed , thank you so much
Thank you, thank you very much. I am glad you like it.
It produced a very funny story.
Thank you, thank you very much
I am delighted with the story you are about to write. Then we have to look for a publisher. It will be the first virily born of the talented people on this site.
Yes, It would be great. It is a great idea. Thank you very much.
You did a wonderful job developing the story! We will see whether Malice keeps his promise, hehe.
Thank you very much. Yes, we will see if Malice behaves well…
That bird is giving everyone a stern look to stay away from everyone on Valencia CF
Yes, everybody must stay away from Valencia CF but Malice is very clever and perhaps he wants the other birds to get infected.
You continued the story perfectly, dear friend ….. Doc will certainly continue this challenge
Thanks a lot, yes, he has written the fourth part.
Very well done. I love this bird, I never see him in my area. Looks like Doc is onboard.
Yes!! Thanks a lot. I have always found very interesting how cuckoos act. They have the fame of being clever.
I have seen them on wildlife shows but never in person.
I have never seen them either. I have found this image on Google.
I have been a member of several social blogging communities. These “challenges” make the Virily community unique. They spur creativity, create a spirit of comradery, and keep things lively here.
Yes, you are totally true. Thanks a lot for your comment.
i accept, and here is the link to the next installment
https://virily.com/virily_poll/tag-you-are-it-challenge-part-4/
That was fast! And the story continues.. Thanks to all of you who have participated already. This is so cool!
thanks – it was fun! I like quick challenges!
Thanks a lot for accepting and writing the fourth part. Thanks a lot.
thanks a lot for providing the short story to be read at the party!!!!
My pleasure, but people should pay for my stories although perhaps there are birds now who are interested in buying books. It was a publicity stunt
I bet Doc will see this and post his soon. I know he wanted to be in this challenge.
Yes, he has written the fourth part.
Awe, way to go and you provided a great picture of one. That was fabulous Halcombe, thank you!! Love it!
Thank you , thank you very much.