that moment when now becomes then
and repeating
you hold your breath
and touch the edge of quiet
that is where I am
the moment trapped
inside the glass bottle
and flung into the sea.
Will the message rise and fall
forever on the waves?
Or washed ashore
a mask in a bottle
a message lost
to be found
and read aloud in a 6-year-olds voice
stumbling over words
and revealing only the fact
that the mystery is now gone…
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Question of
I think sunrise is the best!
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1,Yes
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2.no
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Question of
I think sunset is best!
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Yes
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1.Yes
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2.no
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I also love the sunrise and the sunrise. I have a preference for sunrise by the sea. Then the vapors are very good for health.
sunrise by the sea is so special – love that!!!
Q: I THINK SUNRISE IS THE BEST!
1,Yes (4 votes) – 67%
2.no (2 votes) – 33%
Q: I THINK SUNSET IS BEST!
Yes (5 votes) – 71%
1.Yes (1 votes) – 14%
2.no (1 votes) – 14%
This is a tough question. Love the boat btw. Zoom zoom. I hope you get to enjoy this summer. Okay, about that question…. I am a morning person, I love watching the sunrise. No ones awake, the house and streets are quiet, then that morning light hits. The blues, then the sunrise.. BUT, I like the colors of a sunset better, more golden tones vs the blue ones. Usually more dramatic colors, but I have a hard time staying awake long enough in the summer to catch any.
i am in the same boat as you, (pun intended)!
Har har, yes. I got that. lol
i am here all week, remember to tip your servers well!!!
I love both but I usually miss the sunrise.
each sunrise opens the day for business.
Each sunset opens the night for business!
Beautiful song. I would have a hard time deciding between sunrise and sunset.
it really depends for me, i love them both but it depends on where I am!
Love the sunsets but the sunrises are amazing as well. A message in a bottle brings memories.
i found one on a beach in North Carolina once. a bar placed them around the beach with drink specials!!!!!
Can’t choose between sunrise and sunset, they are totally beautiful but different experiences.
I was reminded of a time when we found a bottle with a message saying ‘God is love’ on the beach.
that is interesting I wonder how far it had traveled?
Great poem. I would love to have the talent to put the words together! I love the sunrise and the sunset to the same extent.
now I am jealous of your photography skills! I wish I could pick up a camera and see what you see!
Don’t be! Photography helps me express myself! We have different talents!🙂
yup! we do have different talents! thanks!!!!