DocAndersen
none shall pass.
the light stops
on the other side
of the other side
and waiting
asks permission to
go forth and multiple
by shrinking waves
and splintering into
millions of colors
to burst
into the air
making children smile
and point
wondering
where the pot of gold is hidden
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Question of
Birds are amazing right?
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Yes
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No
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Question of
Was I younger than 20 when I wrote this poem?
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Yes
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No
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Question of
Or is this poem more recent?
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Yes
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No
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Q: BIRDS ARE AMAZING RIGHT?
Yes (5 votes) – 100%
Q: WAS I YOUNGER THAN 20 WHEN I WROTE THIS POEM?
Yes (4 votes) – 80%
No (1 votes) – 20%
Q: OR IS THIS POEM MORE RECENT?
No (5 votes) – 100%
I miss seeing osprey. Have you written any poems lately Doc? To fly through the rainbow… Impossible but fun to dream about. You took me there. Thank you!
i have – roughly 1 out of 10 poems I publish here is new!
I just saw the one you wrote for LaJenna. That was my question. so glad you still write. You are very good.
thanks – i know many poets much better than I am.
Great poem brother thank you for this awesome poem.
you are of course quite welcome sis!
I thought you wrote the poem later in life due to it feeling full of learned knowledge. I was wrong.
i spent a lot of time on a lake as a child, water was everything. THere was a eagle that lived in one end of the lake, and didn’t allow boats in his corner!
Excellent write , thank you Doc Anderson
you are most welcome – thanks for reading!
You are very talented. Would love to feel free as a bird.
aw thank you, that is so nice of you to say!!!!! i would to be able to fly like a bird!
Very welcome. It is relaxing to watch birds.
ut really is very relaxing!
A beautiful song. I think you wrote this in your young years.
that, would be the right answer – good call!!!!