an impromptu meeting

held there in the light

but the brick wall

and talking the voices bounce

each one shaping  into

cones and tiny bells

that ringing

with the passing wind

remind us to 



consider why

as we stand

in an impromptu meeting

by the edge forever

of the sky…

until the shatter sound is heard

what lies next

what is ahead

what shall we do?

  • Question of

    This is a new poem written last week!

    • Yes
    • No
  • Question of

    Do you ever just stop and converse?

    • Yes
    • No
  • Question of

    Waiting for the person to say what is next?

    • Yes
    • No
  • Question of

    Or just waiting?

    • Yes
    • No


What do you think?

Written by DocAndersen

One fan, One team and a long time dream Go Cubs!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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  1. I am mostly quiet now. This morning my brother called me us and said can I talk to you. (I really wanted to say no, because he feels like he must tell me all the things I am doing wrong. He has become my father.)

    I didn’t say no and I listened and answered for an hour and then I said I had to leave. I don’t have the answers he needs and I cannot fix anything.


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