Want Your Content To Be Bold And Clear? Run It Through Hemingway

Hemingway’s writing career started in the 1920’s. It solicited a great deal of controversy. His novels were in his typical style. which was in unadorned prose, simple and direct. This remarkable style had developed because of his early life as a journalist.


I have discovered something phenomenal. Hemingway!  It shows sentences and common errors; if you see a yellow sentence, shorten or split it. Your readers get lost when your sentence is dense and complicated. They also get lost trying to follow its meandering. Hemingway says you should always use a shorter word and a shorter sentence. Mouse over them for hints. Get rid of adverbs and weakening phrases. Pick words with force but don’t ever use passive voice phrases.

To test my sample content above, copy it and paste it into Hemingway App.Now run your next article through the app. If it stays “white” your writing style is incredible. If not, you can have great fun, fixing it in Hemingway. Paste in your next article and edit away. Or, click the Write button above and compose a new post from 

Enjoy. For a free copy of his famous book: “The Complete Short Stories” – of Ernest Hemingway, click here

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Written by Andre Hartslief


Hello, I’m Andre’ Hartslief, Tranquilpen© 2008 “I finally discovered, that man’s whole purpose, is not to do the right things in life or to be good, to be successful or famous. Our entire purpose in life is to express divinity unto everyone and everything. How we do that, is by transforming ourselves completely, from an old state of existence to a new state and if we start removing those limitations piece by piece, It is only, then, that the Creator of the universe and all life, will begin to express himself, unbridled through us.

Web content faces two insuperable problems: obscurity and neglect.When I use the word obscurity, I mean web content is buried beneath billions of web pages and by neglect, I mean, what if someone actually manages to find your page, they will most probably ignore it or abandon it.So, to conquer these problems, I try to craft my content in a style that search engines can easily find and readers can’t resist. I do this as an earnestly aspiring writer. Outside of this, I’m quite incompetent.


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