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Invitations

I don’t know when it starts

since nothing till muffled

that flute sound grew louder

snaking melodious

lull the heart

and entertain sorrow

in the dry season, heavy rain roared

’till I realized in the eleventh step

that a voice that cannot be erased is an invitation

which when I fulfill,

accompanied by butterfly

between standing people

along with a whisper of mist

my arrival was greeted by a hug of Love.

Ahhh…

Suppose you know the meaning of Love.

Poetry & illustration by Albert Herdie  – Digital painting from part of Life of the Cosmos series – Invitation.

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  1. Love is some of the most beautiful things that happen to a man-love to nurture and maintain is a real art-a perfectly written friend

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  2. Great poem and illustration. That last phrase with hug of love goes well with your new kitties that hug you when you feed, cuddle and put down to bed. Have you named them yet? I was thinking of Ying and yang but also maybe Love and Beauty would be appropriate. Maybe you should start a post asking the Virily community for some name suggestions.

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    • Thank you for the compliment, HistoryGal.

      Actually, I am considering your advice and Kim, Yin & Yang, but your idea of asking for advice from friends in the Virily community is also great. I think I’ll do it. Thanks again.

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  3. What a beautiful greeting you received from a butterfly. Such love was felt through your words. And the beautiful graphics are always enjoyed. Great job.

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    • What? I have posted so many digital paintings as illustrations for my poems, and have you just realized it now?

      Actually, before I was nominated to join the 365 day photo challenge, I only posted digital paintings. As my painting teacher, you seem to lack attention to students.

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      • I must apologise, I don’t read sources … I’d just skip them… but damn! I’ve missed some gems here.

        Yes, yes, it’s my fault, dear teacher… (I can’t be your teacher in anyway, no way I could paint like you!!) Please forgive my lack of attention…

        Actually you should continue to post your works!! They’re awesome!!
        I’ve must think of a way to let them resurface …

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