in

if you remember

at the moment, the flash from

the camera disturbs what

could be seen as the perfect

moment and the dust

settles around us.

drawing circles in the dust

we place clean in the circles

for a moment the dust

rising, argues and tries to settle

again where it had been

we don’t let the particles of

dust

be where they were

the quiet of the dust

in the air. 

swirling around the

well placed nicknacks

in circle of 

dust pushed into the air

and floating back to earth

we watch the glitters in the sky.

  • Question of

    The poem was written 20 years ago can you guess waht was happening when I wrote it?

    • Yes
    • No
  • Question of

    i can’t give you a clue but it is not what you think I promise!

    • Yes
    • No
  • Question of

    it was one of those life events

    • Yes
    • No

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Written by DocAndersen

One fan, One team and a long time dream Go Cubs!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  1. Q: THE POEM WAS WRITTEN 20 YEARS AGO CAN YOU GUESS WAHT WAS HAPPENING WHEN I WROTE IT?
    Yes (1 votes) – 33%
    No (2 votes) – 67%
    Q: I CAN’T GIVE YOU A CLUE BUT IT IS NOT WHAT YOU THINK I PROMISE!
    Yes (1 votes) – 50%
    No (1 votes) – 50%
    Q: IT WAS ONE OF THOSE LIFE EVENTS
    Yes (2 votes) – 100%

    • that is an interesting guess, you are close the twins were born about a year before this. This was a poem I wrote on wrapping paper as we were moving. I found it in a bin that hasn’t been unpacked in 20 years this past week!

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