Alex Ledante
This guy is inspired by the designs used in the Final Fantasy franchise. He’s pretty interesting but I feel like he needs to be pushed further to be truly interesting. Do you have any ideas on how he might be improved?
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Question of
which materials do you prefer?
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this one -
that one
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Question of
do you have any ideas for how to improve this piece?
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Yes
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No
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My pleasure to pitch in and assist you in which direction your work goes.
thanks, I am glad I can count on you
Thank you for your kind comments.
It is I who is indebted to you, sir…
Good to know that we assist each other.
This is different and have nothing to add.
well I will need to add quite a bit before I can call it a day
Well, I do have an idea to pop the character bro. Put just a little dark Burgundy in the middle of his hair do . It will pop this character in a good ways. I see burgundy in his arm and pant gear.
hair dye is very appropriate for such a character…
So you will make this happen. Hoping!!!!!!!!!!!!
I will look into it, this guy isn’t much of a priority right now…
I thought it looks great …
Hmm, if I’ve to nitpick then maybe the shoe … lol
Pick all the nits you want. What about his shoes?
Hmm … I thought the shoe can be more smooth at the curves …
but rmb its nitpicking!
it is a decent critique. uncertain if I can soften the shoes without softening the armor…
Lol, you can do wonders 🙂
I have no idea what to add, I like it very much
I am glad to hear you say so
ok .. ok… how about a bit mouth expression.
less? more? entirely different?
I really do not know how to improve things because they are already excellent now
that’s very kind of you to say
The first thing would be what is he leaping over, I like the overall style and your image naming convention made me laugh (this one, or that one) 🙂
I try to have fun with naming conventions. He may just be leaping into battle, manga can get pretty dodgy when it comes to physics…
you were successful! it made me laugh. I picked that one, only because this one felt too much like going with the first option!
the only difference between them is the material settings on the shoulderpad
There you go, we can now fully understand just how little i understand art. 🙂 I do like both still! But now that I see the difference (that you pointed out) i stick with that one, over this one.
I go with the illustration on the left because its lighter and I like this illustration very much
this style should be on the lighter side, I think
I went with the one on the left since the skin tone looked lighter.
I really appreciate it when you call out your criteria
My pleasure to assist you on your artwork.
it helps me determine which parts are working and which aren’t
I’m not sure but adding powerful color in the background might enhance the image.
the background is just a placeholder (and not a very good one either) rest assured it will be replaced
I have no idea on how to improve it as it just looks great to me. ^_^
how kind of you to say…
don’t worry about it, just find something that suits your taste
it’s a WIP, they all start simple…