Bahlool Shah Afghani
Introduction:-
Hi. This is the story about camel and jackal. It is in the memory of my loving Grandma. Must read it. This isn’t only a story but an advise and thinking
Starting:-
Once there was a camel he used to live in a jungle. One day he meet a jackal. They became friends. One day the jackal said to camel that he knows a garden where there are a lot of fruits, but there is one problem. The camel said what problem? Jackal said the garden comes after a river through which I can’t go there. Camel said I will take you there, just climb on my back. The jackal did as he was said to do. They cross the river and finally reached to the garden.
Suspense (turning point):-
After enjoying variety of fruits the jackal said to camel that I am having herpes and I have to how now. The camel said no don’t do that right now the owner of garden will come here but jackal didn’t agreed and was failed to stop jackal from howling. As the jackal howl, the gardener sleeping near the garden wake up instantly and ran out to the garden. So he a camel ( jackal was gone as he run fast and was disappeared from the garden) there who had eaten fruits of his garden. He became angry, cought the camel and used him as a server.
Release:-
After working 3 , 4 months hardly(taking stones from mountain and putting it miles away for that owner. Camel got sick and was unable to work more. So the gardener release him.
Revenge:-
He got better in few days. Now he decided to take revenge from jackal. He was searching for jackal and finally he find jackal. Jackal asked where you had been for so long time? Camel said I was enjoying those weddings and parties with that gardener, his family and all his friends, there were a lot of food and drinks. The jackal said but their are dogs from which I can’t go their. So the camel said, just climb on my back they won’t reach you. Jackal agreed and they both went to their. When they reached all the dogs was jumping and trying to catch the jackal. The jackal was scared. Camel said to jackal that my back is having herpes and I have to roll below in sand to feel good. Jackal said no don’t go down. But the camel I have beared a lot of Injustice due to you now I have to take my revenge. So he lays down and all the dogs caught the jackal and eat him.
Thanks for reading this folk story as I was told to me by my Grandma. Wish you had enjoyed it and also tell this to your kids.
Awesome story
Thanks
What a good story Bahlool!
Thanks. Can I message you privately?
Your grandmother told you a story where everyone had herpes?
Haha. No, it was a lesson only
Okay but why did they all have herpes? Couldn’t someone pull a muscle or have a cramp? I don’t even understand how you get herpes on your hump…
Perhaps I am reading too much into this
Well the answer is, do you know folk story? Folk story is something which is transferred from generation to generation with no exact history, characters, place,reasons the only exact thing is lesson which is true.
I understand the role of fable in society. Just got a little thrown by the formatting of this one…
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That was a big revenge story
Yeah. That was a good one
Cool story!
Thanks
We have a similar story in Jamaica, only it is Turtle and Scorpion
O yeah. I also heard that one. That’s also good. As I was following u, you also do good posts I like that
Thank you
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The turtle and the scorpion doesn’t have a happy ending
That one I’ve heard. Love the ending
NICE ONCE
Thank you very much. Hope you enjoyed. Maybe it’s good for children.
yes really, By the way which country to you belong.
The country I saw for first time when I came to planet Earth.?? Pakistan.
Hmm.. Waoo Nice.
which city?
Pakistan. I’m Pakistani
Peshawar
Good Bro Nice to meet you!!
Me too. I was following u from the first day when I joined virily. Ur post r really good
Thanks bro!!!!
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I get the gist but i think something got lost in translation. it’s a good folk tale.
Thank you for such support. Well I m trying my best.
A wise advice. From now on I will forbid children to ride camels and wolves.
Thank you. It’s an honor that like it.
Hahaha… you’re very much welcome, my friend.
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Hahaha. Your are very nice Norman. I was following you and u post beautiful
Very nice story, and well told 🙂 I must be careful not to catch herpes Haha!