LaJenna
Doc Anderson has inspired me to write more poetry I should be able to write more poetry, because I have a lot bottled up inside of me.
Poem
An Empty face
is not me
that shows no emotion
But right now
that is my look
so sometimes
I read me an inspiring book
and then my empty face
pulls over it a veil of lace
Beauty then filled in every crevice
No trace of an empty face no more
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Question of
Do you want more poetry from me
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Yes
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No
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Question of
Would you write a poem soon?
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Yes
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No
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A beautiful song. You have a talent for writing. I’m not good at this.
It’s a good poem, flowing smoothly.
no trace of empty face –
wow that line made me stop and reread the whole poem, I was enjoying a walk along the brook, but then the emotion that would cause an empty face jumped in front of me.
wow.
just amazing.
You know how to make sis feel amazing. Thank you so much bro. God bless you!
that is my job isn’t it 😉
love the poem, keep writing and sharing!
That’s a fairly simple poem, with such meaningful lines, and lines, aligned, nicely combined, and entwined.
Always a sign of a good poet.
Better than my corny one-liner, unrefined, I opine.
We all have within us a poet in my opinion. You are inspiring so close your eyes meditate and start writing your thoughts.
Yes, I agree with you.
We do not know what we are capable of sometimes, until we give it a go.
Your poetry is always welcomed. A great one today. And love your flowers too.
Thank you Carol, just trying to lift my mood.
I think I would be a lousy poet. I may give a try sometime though.
You share your thought very easily so you could write great sweet poetry.
I write poems on a different site, but the admin would not approve them for this site.
Mine are always approved, so keep trying.