Bradley Tremmil
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lXX1Oq7lGE4
THis THING ABouT SPRING…
In between winter’s chill
And the falling summer rain
Like a tapestry of Edens
There’s this thing about spring…
Serene the evergreen,
El natural this season brings
Preening countless shades of trees
The honey birds n’ buzzing bees
are floating such as satin sheets
En laced with chiffon-like pleats…
I sense her echoes longing,
Longing like dangling chandeliers
hanging off the ceilings
inside of sparkling penthouse suites…
The bass, oh music the base
Guitars n violins en sync,
Wow oh how the brazen cello strings,
Against the windows
Upon the eyes of my ear
Silent shivering hearts they speak…
To me I hear
Every now n then the heartbeats
of flowers crying out for rain,
They say quando
like when is when?
Somewhere betwixt the rhapsody
I hear an orchestra of angels play;
“Paciencia para o amor
Dreams are just a step away
At every sway
With every move
Listen to the mystery of this groove”…
The thing about spring
It makes you softly say
‘Quando-quando,
Like when is when’
To you if I may
And may I so relay my dear,
Paciencia meu amor, paciencia…
For the rain for the more
Let this thing about spring
Sing to you
A melody of peace,
Paciencia meu amor,
Paciencia…
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Copyright © 2018 Bradley M. Tremmil
If you sing that song in front of my window, I will run to you!
No offense my brother, if you were a different gender I’d be happy to sing to you.
Hahaha… I’m just aware of that, but your poetry is too enchanting indeed.
Lol, I felt like having a good ole laugh. Thanks for the compliment. Much appreciated.
Just be spontaneous. Laugh if there is something funny.
Beautiful song…………..
Thank you Lado, thanks for appreciating my piece
Spanish puts the romance in the romance languages…
That is very true, although in this piece there are more Portuguese words quoted. After French my favorite Mediterranean romantic languages in accordance are Spanish, Italian and Portuguese, of course.
I don’t know enough Spanish to tell the difference, I just know it sounds suave…
A compliment much appreciated from a talented artist such as yourself
I push pixels, you write words- just two different paths to reach the same destination
I like your song … great post
Thank you Vidocka, its good that you like it.
To Bradley Tremmil:
I like your poem
original and “springing
and singing about Spring
Words of rhythm
that make the soul Sing.
Thanks for liking this rhythmic spring thing.
Thank you for this uplifting post. Makes me want to sing but what lol?
If this music doesn’t do it for you then find something that resonates with your soul.