Bradley Tremmil
YOU REMIND ME…
Up on the roof
Gazing at stars
Dreaming of the future
where dreams take off in flight
You remind me of August nights…
Washed up sea-shells
Pebbles on the beach
Serene like an ocean tide
Girl you got that vibe
You remind me of a summer breeze…
An Eastern town with Graffiti walls
High heat the water the wetter
Strolling after dark
Barefoot in the park
You remind me a Turkish delight…
They ask me have I seen her
I tell you how I see ya,
Festa fiesta
No bore no siesta
Mo’ fun mo’ sunshine
So swell
When I get that feel in
Me write thee the letter…
You remind me
of this one thing,
You remind me
of a spot I know so well,
You remind me especially
of me…
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Copyright © 2018 Bradley M. Tremmil
Walking in the park with my friends, I like to go back to my childhood to get the real feeling.
Sometimes we need those carefree moments just like a child
You remind me of August nights and good vibes! =)
Oh yeah! I feel you, I feel you…
Another inspiring poem, that left me in wonder.
Oh my goodness Jenna, you’re making my inner muse blush. Thank you!
Nice job as always. You painted a mental picture as I read. A nice flow.
Thank you Carol I am glad you like it.
You are always welcome.
You are a poet. Good job. To whom do you dedicate this?
Thank you Mavic, I’m honored that you think so. To someone unusually different who exudes a very good vibe.
So nice… this someone is lucky to have a poem just for her
nice post thank you very much
Thank you reading, you are most welcome.