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WIP for Passage to Shinjuku

Try as I might, I just can’t seem to find the right background for this piece. But I resolve to keep trying until I do, tanoshimi ni shite kudasai…


What do you think?


    • Okay, I can see that. Honestly, it wasn’t intentional but it would be an easy read. The actual dark values of the piece could certainly drive it in that direction…

  1. I think the background is perfect, but of course, you who have the concept of this work would know better what is needed and more appropriate. Beyond that, somehow I feel the girl’s head is a bit too big.

    • I see her in downtown Tokyo, with the background sliding out of focus to introduce a bokeh effect. Her head is fine, what you’re seeing is the camera moved above the eyeline…