Benny
“You are not serious,” Sam said in disbelief.
“I mean it,” Jane said. “We cannot be living as if there is no tomorrow.” She picked up her bag which contained her possessions including clothes. “I’m going back home.”
“But, we’ve been having a good time,” he said.
“Yah, for all the wrong reasons. Look, I have lost a lot of precious time and I ain’t gonna lose anymore of it.”
He stood at the door to block her exit. “Don’t be childish,” she said. “If you don’t let me get out, I will scream.”
“I knew you were taking advantage of me. You have never loved me,” he said.
“I no longer know the meaning of love but one thing I know, I owe my parents an apology and another chance to go back to school. I now know they meant good for me.”
“What about me?”
She pushed her way through the door. She halted a few centimeters from the door but didn’t turn to face him. “You’ve to learn what you want in life. Time has taught me the hard way that I shouldn’t waste it aimlessly. Goodbye, Sam.”
“You’re evil,” he said but she had already left.
Well written. Are written a novel???
Sorry, I mean: Are you writing a novel????
Thank you. I haven’t started but intend to very soon. I’m intending to write a nonfiction book starting march.
Very interesting story. It could be real.
Thank you. Yes, it could be real.
That’s a very interesting story! Is it based on true events?
Thank you Ellie925. It’s not based on a true story.
It is hard to be misunderstood in life.
You’re right, Carol. It is sadly the case in our world.
Nice story and what’s the end?
Actually, I don’t have the end. I wrote the story 2 years ago. I’m trying to understand these characters so that I can have the ending.
Thanks for the read.
With great pleasure, myfriend
Oh my, what is going to happen? Is she gone forever?
I am not so sure if it’s the end or not. When I study them carefully, I will get to know how it will all turn out.
Thanks for the read.
what a great story, now I want to know what happened next?
she left, he was devastated but did he learn what he wanted?
Thank you, Doc.
I was into the world of the girl. She had enough, saw how wrong she was and how right her parents were. The guy seems not to understand why she decided to go back home. He still wants to have a good time. I don’t if he learned. Maybe he will…
We will find out.
now that is a great teaser!
Thank you. I will have to get to know the guy better. What does he want or what are his expectations?
i suspect all of us get stuck in a rut. we live within the box we create.
You are right. Sometimes we are our own prisoners.