Bradley Tremmil
COME LAY WITH ME.
Underneath the stars
Come lay with me,
Come chill with me
Lets count the constellation…
Lets pretend
we have x-ray eyes
We can count the planets,
You pick Jupiter
I take Mars or whichever,
Lets make a promise
to never say never…
Lets touch Venus
and learn about her mysterious genus,
Lets close our eyes
and travel the Milky way…
We can play a little,
We don’t have to go
to the 3rd heaven -yet,
But when I look
into your dazzling eyes
Let me explore the corridors
of your mind…
Let me navigate
untapped compartments
that you never knew existed,
Even that extraordinary
part of you to yourself
you hide so dearly…
Here’s an open invitation,
Any ole season
You don’t need a reason to
Come play,
Come lay with me…
Copyright © 2018 Bradley M. Tremmil
I’m guessing you’re never single for long
Both avenues have their merits
Indeed they do. The grass is always greener on the other side…
Science taught me that grass is grass. Always green and lush where there’s an abundance of water…
Reason triumphs over instinct for once
I can see my dream date playing out while reading this. laying on the hood of a car just staring up at the stars and of course, with a bottle of bubbly.
That sounds like a cool scene. It could fit into a movie someday. And there must a-be-a at least 1 bottle of vinos!
When I look into your eyes
comet pulled my hand
invites me to fly among the stars
who was born and died
in the entire universe
multiverses
and in One.
You are a true visionary Albert!
Nothing can be seen without vision
nothing needs to respond without a word hook.
What a romantic setting, love the Robin Thicke song, and your words create a loving mood.
Thank you Carol. As for the song it’s one of those rare classics that can never age. Normally I’d want to remix certain songs but this one, I wouldn’t change a thing.
I agree with you. Not a big fan of his except for this song.
Well I am just about speechless after reading this poem. It is for sure my favorite. You are a poetry master that is for sure. Just fantastic! The photo match the poem so well.
Wow Jenna. Thank you for the compliment!!
You are always welcome Bradley. Keep them coming!
Excellent! I love what you’ve written!
Why thank you Elena, I’m glad you love it!