this one is just grungetastic
desert (5/12)
Alex Ledante
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she is in a desert, so the light quality should reflect that
I’ve been there, and done that…
So bright, but more artistic and able to brighten up the appearance of her too…
I want you to feel the sun burning your skin when you see these
Yes, I can feel it. Really like in the desert!
oh let the sun beat down upon my face
stars fill my dreams
I am a traveler of both time & space
to be where I have been…
Geez! It’s my first time reading your poem!
The grunge look gives the character more light for me to see her better.
the better to see her with? you sound like a big, bad wolf to me
I guess I am a big bad wolf with kindness in my heart.
is such a thing even possible?
I could be wrong that all wolves are not mean.
Way too hot and boiling for me…
yeah, the opposite of the great white north
Yes there’s the word I was looking for
just plain hot. kinda has an oasis feeling