jaylar
Issac had been on his first overseas posting when he met Rosa. She was pretty, bright, and more, she was very rich.
He fell in love with her as she did with him, and they married, and went to his home country. They travelled around, Rosa became a citizen, and then, he was deployed to Paradise.
He had never been to a such a beautiful place, never lived in such a mansion, never drove such a car.
All this was part of his position in the company. A big, important position. But that wasn’t all, there were the people, the people he met outside of work. Amazing people.
People who had been and were and knew…
People unlike any he had ever met before.
To make a story more compelling, have the characters show us, not just tell. This is a good summary of a plot, so the next step would be to write the dialogue.
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