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The Virily Guessing Game Poem Challenge – haiku

sensei wa sugoi

kare wa yūrei o ai

toryo no kami

His economy of line is breathtaking

yet in each stroke, such life!

When I watch him paint, I am like a child

That isn’t a tear in my eye

just too much beauty for my eye to hold

so it runs down my cheek

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19 Comments

  1. I’m hoping Virily will move from its English language bias. A worldwide platform should encourage expression from multiple corners of the world without cultural or linguistic chauvinism.

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