Bradley Tremmil
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SWEET ON YA…
Remember the time
Young n’ free
Creepin’ round town
like we was hoodlums
Had my hood up
We was Boo’d up,
Two’d up
You were my Bonnie
I was your Clyde…
Fun done won
Lots of action
Crimes of passion
The only crimes were
You loving me
And me loving you
You told me you loved
Asked me how I felt,
I was like ‘dido’…
Always on the go
Always rollin’
Still you was patient
Pretty young thing
Sweeter than sugar
Your hair long n’ soft
Smile so infectious
Just 1 touch from your hand
would melt me in a minute…
Lady you shine
Your heart of gold
In time I’d seen a lotta girls
But ain’t too many
that had the right mind
I gotta say
Oh what a lady
A lady you are and still today…
We all reminisce sometime
That’s why
I pour 1 for the memore-ry
2 for creativity
3 for sentimentality
And 1 more,
Well just because…
Yeah we gotta do our thing
Gotta keep moving
Gotta keep grooving
But if I had to take it all back
Just for you I’d write thee a track
The words I shoulda said
woulda been something like:
‘Sweet on ya’
Got the perfect feet on ya
Toes so nice n’ neat on ya
Caramel El-natural
Perfect tan mo’ better than
Can’t help but put my heat on ya,
Girl you got that joie de vivre
The kinda beauty
the sun loves to shine on
Baby boo you’re like my ocean Bleu
Anything you want I’ll do
The stars of the galaxy
must feel ashamed
just by looking at you,
If I had my way
I’ll let purple rain fall from above
Cos you my dove
are somethin’ like royalty,
Again n’ again I can go on
And still 2 times again
But then my friend
You got your den
And I got my pen,
If n’ when till we meet again
So long, bye-bye, ta-ta
Hey there pretty mama
Just know if I never-ever told you,
This boy was really-really, really!
‘Into you’…
‘Sweet on ya’
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Got the perfect feet on ya…yeah
Copyright © 2018 Bradley M. Tremmil
you really know how to lay it down
I try I do try. Thank you for the compliment!
That you try is most important, but don’t let that detract from the part where you succeeded…
For sure I totally agree. The thing is when I feel the vibe it just flows out like a river, I get caught up in a natural high. You know what sayin!!
I also love the feeling of being in the zone, to the point where I don’t care what I’m creating, so long as I am there…
The words are very romantic. Then I got to the photo and had a big smile! 🙂
Carol your words are like an authentic balm to my soul. Yours are truly special my dear.
Your writing style is so groovy, always fun to be enjoyed and inspirational.
Thanks my brother, I’m happy to be an inspiration. I hope you enjoy more that’s on the way…
Pleasure is always mine, brother
Wow! thank you Jenna for appreciating my art. This is a very special piece…
Perfect end of this perfect poem. I just love how you write poetry.