Bradley Tremmil
LET’S DANCE…
Firstly I would like to say,
When I stepped into the scene
I was overwhelmed
by the scent of your charisma…
Mercie,
Thank you for looking
as lovely as you do
It’s just so incredible
That on this day
At this time
At this very moment,
You’re an inspiration to my being…
Hmm…seeing you wearing well,
Your choice of rouge
The highlights of your makeup
The way you wear your hair
And that garment,
that garment
Looks all the more glamorous
under this lighting…
Exciting the way you bite your lip,
Of course I love your accent
Just as much as you like mine,
Lady your bouge,
You’re like a butterfly
with spread open wings,
As your smiles are expressions
Your moves are as gestures
Your body speaks a language
That only mine can clearly understand,
Enchanted by the evening
The character in your feet
Points in a direction
that seeks much fun n’ laughter…
Oh the room is filled with ambience,
The ambience of the food of life
That glosses over this here floor
which appears to be as a sea of glass,
I’ve no secret
Let it be known
That while I’m loving all this mingling
This man is tingling from head to toes…
So without further ado
Miss wonderful tonight,
I can hear your feet say
‘Shall we dance,
Shall we dance’…
On that note,
Lend me your hand
And let’s us dance!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cH1ANRtc-7w
Copyright © 2018 Bradley M. Tremmil
It seems she has good karma to be full of charm and entertain the males with dance.
Great poem, Brother.
Good karma is always great inspiration. And that’s when we feel enchanted to feel free inside the dance of life…
Even above your beautiful words, we dance.
Wow… you are the true talent for writing songs
Thank you Vidocka for appreciating my art.
the first place I went was Bowie
Was that a music concert?
I meant that was the first place I went when I read your title
Thank you Carol! Words paint a picture and telleth the story…
Wow you are such a poet my friend. You painted a beautiful picture here with your words.