Bradley Tremmil
BEYOND THE OPEN DOOR.
Into the blue
Higher than the bind
No clouds of grey reside up there,
Beyond the barriers there are visions,
Visions of the suns
Suns that speak in rays of pure D’or
The right to birth upon the wings
The wings which mount up and fly
Fly these celestial skies
Where only eagles dare to bare…
Above the stratosphere
There can be no other,
For who can breathe in heavenly dust
And who can see into the suns delight?
The wise amongst the fools shall know,
the kind of heart who’s brave enough to go…
Love’s light in flight
to where the love,
The love is no ordinary love,
Visions of the rise in sun sets
Beyond the open door
there’s a story never told
To bask inside of awe
Is to soar swifter than the eagles,
For the heart who speaks its truth
Come flow into the poetry
Beyond the open door…
Copyright © 2018 Bradley M. Tremmil
This is beautiful poetry in motion!
Thank Ellie for appreciating my poetry in motion. I apologise the delayed reply.
A very good poem. I really enjoyed it.
Thanks man I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Amazing poetry, it makes you want to fly and explore!
Thank you Ellie I’m honored that my art can make you feel this way.
Wow! This is beautiful poetry in motion! Love this poem and the eagle.
Thank you Pamela for loving this poem. There’s something amazing about eagles, they are known to fly higher than any bird.
Wow Bradley, I felt as if I was soaring with the birds. Very peaceful to read.
Mind and spirit can be amazing when in sync with the universe.
110% agree with you.
Beautiful and memorable. I remembered “If I Could Fly” – Helloween when reading this poem.
Only you would think Halloween with a piece like. But then again art is subjective.
Have you read the song’s lyrics, my friend?
No, not until you asked. Now that I have, I see Helloween not halloween. Thank you my friend.
You are very much welcome, my friend
Nicely done. I am impressed with the words and the photo you chose.
Thank you Trenna Sue this is 1 of my favourites.