Bradley Tremmil
AND THEN SOME…
The old cliché
That beauty is only skin deep
capitulates towards platitude,
For a poet such as I
If I may relay with gratitude
On a scale of longitude and latitude
I lay this down with a little attitude…
Senorita Bella Dama
I like your personality
You’ve got my creativity on a levity
And then some…
This kinda beauty
is what the sun likes to shine on
And what good is a diamond
if it don’t know how to be,
When you want that certain
sparkle in your eyes
Come get some…
If you hide behind the shade
Right on thru the grey
I’ll send my rays of light
to whisper sweet nothings
onto your belle of skin
And then some,
Them someting-somethings
like the wine n’ dine hon’
Cos my rhymes are d’oeuvres
of tasty treats before the melodies
begins to play,
And then some…
Copyright © 2018 Bradley M. Tremmil
Wow, you and Albert should have a standoff with writing. It comes so natural to you two. I am amazed at your talent.
Thanks CDM, The Sunset Queen.
Our styles are different. Albert the Philosopher is more Ecclesiastical. And so far I’ve been more Boombastic with my writing as it seems to be more popular. I playing around with other themes though.
I had the fun time reading this epistle of yours. c”,)
I like to hear that. I’m glad you did. Thank you!
I am looking forward to reading some of your works here. c”,)
As long as you keep liking I’ll keep em coming. Thanks man!
Albert said it best!!! Your Poems never cease to amaze me. Awesome!! Go check out my Dare challenge. I think it is the Pixbay poem one, I dared, Carol, you and Albert to write a poem from a Pixbay picture.
Thank you Jenna. I accept and I’m happy to be part of your challenge.
I am getting there, trying my best to catch up!!!
No rush, but keep in mind we are waiting for ya. It’s not the same without you.
I can’t say it better than Paul. Wonderful and romantic words and beautiful music!
Just you liking it says enough for me. Thank you!
Layers of beauty
you are lining them up in gray
giving them music to dance
then all applauded
fascinated
all still standing applause
when your smile
goes behind the curtain.
A little bow.
And then some more…
Then the lights out
you take home the applause
to satisfy meaning
and then some more…
Great post have you written!
Thank you Branka I hope to write many more. And them some! Lol
What a great post have you written!
Thank you Elena I appreciate you taking the time to read.
Another winning rhyme prescription from Virily’s lyrical love doctor!
Thank you Paul I trust that the medicine is winning.