work in progress (1/4)

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1. Love is indeed a variable entity… I think this piece is wonderful.

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   • Did I ever post the finished version of this?

2. Pick any star crossed lovers- Romeo & Juliet, Abelard & Heloise, Paris & Helen… They’re thick on the ground

3. Wow, there is something different about this ordinary couple and love it

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   • I hope they’re not an ordinary couple!

4. They almost got to the real cool!

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   • Like all star-crossed lovers, their story was doomed before it ever began

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     • It’s like Genesis, right?

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       • In that context, much less doomed

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         • Then what is the equivalent comparison?

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         • Pick any star crossed lovers- Romeo & Juliet, Abelard & Heloise, Paris & Helen… They’re thick on the ground

5. Lovely young people in love

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   • I don’t have the heart to tell her…