desert (5/12) List item Submitted to "Radha – WIP" Approved by Alex Ledante March 29, 2019, 3:55 am 48 Views 10 Votes 16 Comments Share Tweet Pin this one is just grungetastic MoreReport Item navigation Previous submission Next submission View full list Share Tweet Pin Written by Alex Ledante facebook pinterest twitter 16 Comments Leave a Reply she is in a desert, so the light quality should reflect that 1 Log in to Reply I’ve been there, and done that… 1 Log in to Reply So bright, but more artistic and able to brighten up the appearance of her too… 1 Log in to Reply I want you to feel the sun burning your skin when you see these 1 Log in to Reply Yes, I can feel it. Really like in the desert! 1 Log in to Reply oh let the sun beat down upon my face stars fill my dreams I am a traveler of both time & space to be where I have been… 1 Log in to Reply Geez! It’s my first time reading your poem! 1 The grunge look gives the character more light for me to see her better. 1 Log in to Reply the better to see her with? you sound like a big, bad wolf to me Log in to Reply I guess I am a big bad wolf with kindness in my heart. 1 Log in to Reply is such a thing even possible? Log in to Reply I could be wrong that all wolves are not mean. 1 Way too hot and boiling for me… 1 Log in to Reply yeah, the opposite of the great white north Log in to Reply Yes there’s the word I was looking for 1 Log in to Reply just plain hot. kinda has an oasis feeling Log in to Reply Leave a Reply Cancel replyYou must be logged in to post a comment.
oh let the sun beat down upon my face stars fill my dreams I am a traveler of both time & space to be where I have been… 1 Log in to Reply
she is in a desert, so the light quality should reflect that
I’ve been there, and done that…
So bright, but more artistic and able to brighten up the appearance of her too…
I want you to feel the sun burning your skin when you see these
Yes, I can feel it. Really like in the desert!
oh let the sun beat down upon my face
stars fill my dreams
I am a traveler of both time & space
to be where I have been…
Geez! It’s my first time reading your poem!
The grunge look gives the character more light for me to see her better.
the better to see her with? you sound like a big, bad wolf to me
I guess I am a big bad wolf with kindness in my heart.
is such a thing even possible?
I could be wrong that all wolves are not mean.
Way too hot and boiling for me…
yeah, the opposite of the great white north
Yes there’s the word I was looking for
just plain hot. kinda has an oasis feeling