Haiku for Sunday, January 5, 2020
A Desire for Work Life
She shines dynamic
Fortune to parallel places
One hoped rivals #@&*#!!
Written by Fifi Leigh
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Haiku for Sunday, January 5, 2020
A Desire for Work Life
She shines dynamic
Fortune to parallel places
One hoped rivals #@&*#!!
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Here, I fixed this one because I forgot to count the “to” last time. So, since I didn’t count it the first time, it shouldn’t be in this Haiku anyway.
Haiku for Sunday, January 5, 2020
A Desire for Work Life
She shines dynamic
Fortune parallel places
One hoped rivals #@&*#!!
I forgot to count the “to” in which I counted 7. Whatever…
Shame about the 8 syllables in line 2!
Interesting Haiku. There are rivals in many different situations.