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The long gray line

The sound was grating

high pitched wearing your ears

with a smile.

Tearing at you

with the sound of steel

pressing on steel

and tearing

the molecules of air between

apart, the screaming sound

of air ripped in half

left to die

by the metal.

Can you hear it?

or is just me

the sound of air dying

molecules writhing in pain

as split

they cannot reunite

on the ground

by the metal

no longer air.


What do you think?

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Written by DocAndersen

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