this is nice and all, but I want some more drama
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Alex Ledante
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this is fresh out of the oven, needs a lot of work
I am responding to all your comments that I can…
The facial expression of pain sells her trouble that she is in.
still having trouble with the eyes
That is okay since you will be able to work out the bugs in the eyes of the young lady.
sooner or later, I will figure it out
That is the right way to solve the problem with the artwork.
Still shows an anxious person but a bit too clean and tidy. I suppose that is what we are supposed to be, but I cant call it real
agreed, I tried to grunge it up further
you can add bruises maybe
definitely want to make her mascara darker. bruises might be too much, or just what it needs…
yes a bit smudge…because she’s crying… bruises a bit on the knee…
I want to make the mascara darker
ok that’s nice. i can imagine her looks.