Haiku for Saturday, 1.25.20
A Regret About My Future
Lofty giant spat
But he sees peace before war
Girl inside bottle
Written by Fifi Leigh
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Haiku for Saturday, 1.25.20
A Regret About My Future
Lofty giant spat
But he sees peace before war
Girl inside bottle
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what does the girl inside the bottle hear?
I used whatever words I got when I rolled the many dice. there are words on each side, and I used the words that displayed on top side. so, this haiku game is like a puzzle. i have to try to make sense with the words I gets, picking words that somehow work together. I made this haiku sound surreal.
so, i made it sound like a genie coming out of the bottle…
it really works overall good job!