The WATER is thin: fold it in my Pocket and Lock it in
johndavisnearby
The water is thin
fold it down in
my Pocket & Lock it in
a plastic Packet
Walking by the Sea
take home the beach
that the eye can Reach
listen to it roar
Hold it in a Globe
My hand turns it over
It amazes me more
the mind is Fed
tight in Bed
a mystery Ahead
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I like how you traversed from the descriptive into the surreal. Nice write.
Beautiful poem! I love it! Thnx!
To Carol DM
Water clings to the body like electricity on the string
of a Kite
Silk and Satin describe its flow and flight:
the wonder of water as Thin
as a bubble in the Light
Wow this is very surreal. The image adds to the mood of your words.