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The WATER is thin: fold it down in my Pocket and Lock it IN

The WATER is thin: fold it in my Pocket and Lock it in
johndavisnearby     

The water is thin
fold it down in
my Pocket & Lock it in
a plastic Packet
Walking by the Sea
take home the beach
that the eye can Reach
listen to it roar
Hold it in a Globe
My hand turns it over
It amazes me more
the mind is Fed
tight in Bed
a mystery Ahead

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I like how you traversed from the descriptive into the surreal. Nice write.

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3 Comments

  1. To Carol DM

    Water clings to the body like electricity on the string
    of a Kite
    Silk and Satin describe its flow and flight:
    the wonder of water as Thin
    as a bubble in the Light