I always recommend happy and free laughing as in
Something tells me
that there is a world
where there is no day
or even a night
question of a sunrise
or a twilight
obviously,
does not arise!
Without a sun
will it be dark
then there is no night
from where ,then,
comes the light?
They say intellects
shine in this world
they energize
akin a sun
nobody hankers
after material
and there is no crime
humans remain clean
not relishing earthly grime.
Entry here is not free
you need to qualify
exhibit no greed,avarice,
violence,gluttony
or any of sins known
practice a sinless state
for a while
then one day you begin the ascent
onwards to sky
before your time comes
for final ascent
you enjoy the bliss
savoring the new world’s kiss
nothing is on your hold or even hog
you are already just less than God!
Good concept covered, well done.