Bradley Tremmil
BEE IN YOUR BONNET…
Here’s another sonnet,
Hakuna matata no worry
It’s just the bee up on a fuzz
Buzzing at you like a flurry for your bonnet…
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Bee ready for the weather
Any kinda whether
As the summer heat that speaks
Bee floating like a butterfly
all across the country side…
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Like satellite swirl in orbit
Bee gliding over the meadow
Transmitting into frequency
listening for your calling out,
Ring-a-ring that special thing
The beating of your heart
that goes boom-room-wroom…
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Beeping thru the garden
cos the fascination’s on creation
Searching for a certain spot
while the sun peaks like a sauna,
Tho the flora be the plentiful
In n’ out no doubt
it gots ta be that special pout…
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Whistle-ling like a kettle see
Coffee Bee to copy thee circle-ling the runaway
Runny for the honey
Up and down the avenue
loving on your pétale…
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There’s another sonnet
Gots the Bee up on it
Pretty pearl it’s you who won it,
Starring thee the prize to be
Time n chance a special place
Where there’s petal pollination
naturally it’s chemistry,
A little fuzz in the buzz
Hey there lonely girl
would you like to have a bee
way up in your bonnet…
Copyright © 2017 Bradley M. Tremmil
Always enjoyable and inspirational!
. It is a great pleasure to share my works. I am grateful to equally give and receive. Thank you Albert!
You are right, my friend and you’re welcome
Your writing style is different than most.
I remember as a kid my grandmother telling me “you can’t like everybody else” In this restless world the hardest thing to do is to find one’s own signature. When you do, its an amazing place to be. Thank you!!!
It should be “you can’t be like everybody else”
Your grandmother was a very wise lady. You are welcome.
Another great poem that touches my soul.
When I hear and read comments like this, more and more I realize the reasons I’m drawn to write. Thank you
Please do, your work is incredible.
Thank you Ellie…much appreciated
Beautiful poem and song!