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There are some poets in Virily who often make beautiful poems. Sometimes, I find it difficult to comment and appreciate in regular expressions, given the beauty, inspiration, message or meaning contained in them, so I often comment in poetry as well.

Maybe it’s not worth the poem I comment on, or maybe even down to the beauty of its meaning, but at least I try to express my admiration and appreciation for their work.

One of the poets was Bradley Tremmil. He is the last poet I give such comments for his poetry. This is the page where you can find his very impressive poem – And Then Some.

Below is my poem that I wrote as a comment for him.

Layers of beauty

you are lining them up in gray

giving them music to dance

then all applauded


all still standing applause

when your smile

goes behind the curtain.

A little bow.

And then some more…

Bradley Tremmil

Then the lights out

you take home the applause

to satisfy meaning

and then some more…


What do you think?


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