Albert Herdianto Widjojo
There are some poets in Virily who often make beautiful poems. Sometimes, I find it difficult to comment and appreciate in regular expressions, given the beauty, inspiration, message or meaning contained in them, so I often comment in poetry as well.
Maybe it’s not worth the poem I comment on, or maybe even down to the beauty of its meaning, but at least I try to express my admiration and appreciation for their work.
One of the poets was Bradley Tremmil. He is the last poet I give such comments for his poetry. This is the page where you can find his very impressive poem – And Then Some.
Below is my poem that I wrote as a comment for him.
Layers of beauty
you are lining them up in gray
giving them music to dance
then all applauded
fascinated
all still standing applause
when your smile
goes behind the curtain.
A little bow.
And then some more…
Then the lights out
you take home the applause
to satisfy meaning
and then some more…
It leaves no room for comments because it leaves us with nothing to say.
Thank you for your visit, Elenka.
Another example of how awesome, friendly and inspiring our community is!
Thank you very much, Ellie
Good for you Albert for spotlighting Bradley. He is such a unique and talented writer, I often find myself at a loss for words after reading his works.
Thank you so much, Carol. I am remembering whom I have ever made a commentary in the form of poetry, including to you I am sure…
You are welcome and again, thank you. You are such an inspiration every day when I read your posts Albert. I appreciate the constant support and encouragement.
Wow! Thanks for such great appreciation of support, Carol
You know you are very welcome.