Albert Herdianto Widjojo
Respect and gain respect are part of the backbone of life. But nerves and blood are the ones able to uphold it, such as our souls respect our body and our mentality after we honor him as the real owner of our life.
As my respect and appreciation to LaJenna who cherishes friendship, I write a second poem for LaJenna’s Challenge she has begun.
Outdated
Amazement caller
glaring openly
or stealing with a glance
invites seduction
give status
in a confident chin up
spin around here and there
rolling over seconds
then obsolete
abandoned
carrion
somewhere it is stored
its former grandeur
who lost you
so easily replaced
are you still be remembered?
by your soul?
Every age has its beauty. Even old age. The poem is great.
Thank you very much for the compliment, Elenka.
The challenge is indeed very interesting, so I took the chance
Thank you very much, Tas.
outdated, but nice…….
Something outdated often remains nice, as I am… Hahahahahaha…
Powerful from start to finish. Loved it!
As I loved your compliment too…
Thanks and go check out my latest post. Me in Kindergarten lol