I see my contest
entries
and imagery
a group of words
going from London to Paris
and then to New York
and then right back
your vocabulary is rich
you weave imagery
as such
but then where is the meaning
of that wordy patch
many have done this
and got GOLDs
and made a name
but mine contests are different
I would look for meaning
and good fit meaning
and I can award a small poet too
and ask the senior entry
to go to loo
where I would flush it down
toilet !
Example: Wool of iron in a pestle of redwood as sun-rays go reckless so windy and raucous; she treads gardens of diamonds as gold smirks in sidewalks;her love is an arrow on an arch yet to be taken in by NASA for a launch(LOL this line is meaningful with rich comedy whereas the earlier two appear to carry no meaning at all)
LOL do not take it serious as I also do such divergent thinking very often but I am clear that I have no start of a story,middle or end of it and entry is a free verse just for reading pleasure of it and a challenge to draw meaning out of it:Wool of Iron: It exists but is used to clean utensils and rust
Pestle of redwood: I doubt its existence but wooden pestles exist
but what was the need to put wool of iron in a wooden pestle-for the heck of it- or no you wish to communicate that something hard was dealt,with risk, very softly
sun-rays go reckless- are sun-rays animated? Yes, they are as they grow dense from morning to mid afternoon but then do they turn raucous and windy. Well, they might as they blend with a windy terrain where forests may whistle raucouslyGardens of diamonds- may mean a garden in full bloom
sidewalks of gold-may mean lush green sidewalk of ripe grass
smirks in sidewalks -may mean the ripe grass on a wilt under sharp Sun
somewhere the meanings must show or you should be ready with one when sought!2