alibb
That unknown orb is there,
not visible but emitting light.
A woman could see and feel it,
A man could see and feel it,
but the proud failed to see it.
It’s being melted, slowly, by despising acts.
Finally, all left are a mesh of molten,
that hardens into a burden.
The proud had not gained anything
but loses something that lights up
the surrounding.
This is the 6th entry with “original” images. Just a quick note for myself for a challenge which I must post with only self taken photos or illustrations as cover image.
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Do you believe some things, when destroyed are not fixable?
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Yes
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No
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waoo great nice post!!! 🙂
I believe somethings broken can be fixed, but something can’t be fixed. Just depends
Yes, I agree … it really depends …
so we need to be careful 🙂
This is my first time reading your poem. That arouses my suspicion.
My apology for I can’t answer your difficult question.
LOL … hmm … what suspicion?
Hmm … it’s not a conspiracy plan …
I suspect that you are a psychic in disguise because you are talking about an invisible orb.
I’m just someone who ran out of the asylum … lol
shhhhh ~~~
As far as I know the escapees have been caught already.
you step on a bug, it stays dead. no fixing that
LOL. Ah!!
Love this one!!
No argument!
but everything that has happened to me in my life so far, I’ve been able to recover from so I’m pretty fixable or quite fortunate…
A wonderful challenge you have created for yourself. I love your words. And my heart is broken forever, it can never be fixed. That is one example I can think of.
Thank you, for the compliment…
I do hope you heart could be fix …
or at least become whole again…
🙂
I believe that sometimes broken is broken forever.
Yes for somethings, others just takes time to recover