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Torn from a peaceful moment

The sound of the door clicking


it is shut.

the snick of tumblers turning to

lock in place. the locks secure

but disconnected

locked but securing nothing

we reach for tendrils

of what was once secure

as it flies away not on butterfly wings

but on explosions of spent air

as if discharged

Laughing as it whizzes past

the clicking door to a path


until the clicking stops

and the pooled silence


to fill the room.

all torn from a peaceful moment.


What do you think?

17 points

Written by DocAndersen

One fan, One team and a long time dream Go Cubs!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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  1. Reminded me of my favorite Natalie Imbruglia’s song:
    🎶I’m all out of faith
    This is how I feel, I’m cold and I am shamed
    Lying naked on the floor
    Illusion never changed
    Into something real
    Wide awake and I can see the perfect sky is torn
    You’re a little late
    I’m already torn🎶

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