Part -7 Ellie’s twist to the story
Rustle, rustle, growl, growl, grump. Everyone was holding their breath because they didn’t want to miss what or who is going to come out of the tall grass. The air was filled with tension. Finally, the most adorable view was in front of their eyes: a baby deer barely as tall as the tall grass.
Some birds were still scared, but others rushed to see the baby deer closely. It was a cute and friendly deer that probably got lost. The birds offered it ice cream, but one wise bird said that they should first give it water. They started looking for the water, and they suddenly realized that while everyone was busy with the baby deer, Malice had disappeared…
Part 8 As I see it ..
Those coal like eyes filled with fear and tears threatening to run down anytime, stoked the birds’ maternal instincts. Most of women were occupied with the baby deer, trying to comfort him. The men were not so greatly interested after the initial concern. They were more worried about Malice. Malice’s past hadn’t been something they could forget so easily.
Malice had sneaked her eggs into their nests and had deceived them into rejecting their weaklings. Malice was surely up to no good. The wise owl mentioned how Malice didn’t seem too happy about the way his story reading was disturbed. They others nodded in agreement. After much discussion they formed two search parties, one to find the baby deer’s mother and other to find Malice.
Introvert will now tell how the search went on .
Here is the link to the rest of the story
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The story becomes more and more interesting.
I am glad you think so, that will keep this story going for sometime.
Love your part of the story and that bird is incredible.
That is an Asian cuckoo, Thank you Carol.
This is awesome! The story is getting more and more exciting.
That is a good sign, this is fun really.
Awe, this is so sweet, your are so good at this.
So whos going to publish this? lol It is great and thank you for continuing. Intro, are you ready?
It has been fun reading this and taking it further. Waiting for introvert to give her twist to the story. all thanks to you Kim.
I love it. Malice is clearly dangerous and he hates when somebody interrupts his reading. We should not forget his past…
I am with you on this, you know Malice better, perhaps he is wild at being disrupted.
This story becomes more and more interesting. You are a talented writer.
The credit goes to Kim who started this. Having so much fun here.
great job moving the story forward. It is taking some interesting turns.
Thanks Doc, I wonder if Introvert will help find Malice.
all is possible it is only the probability that drives change however!
Let’s wait for Introverts twist to the tale.