Mechanical Angels

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1. It seems to me that the mechanical angel is very mysterious and impressive image, liked your poem very much!!!

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   • thanks for liking it, yes! finally someone liked it.

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2. Great idea … I like the song very much

   • This is not a song yet, my bf is trying to put some chords on it. LOL

3. Love! Sounds like an angel that fixes those that need to be healed ; )

   • wow. thanks this is something good as well. maybe I can add that line.

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4. I don’t know where the idea of this poem came from, I like it very much!

   I even feel that you wrote the poem for me.

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   • thanks so much Albert, I appreciate your appreciation, so I appreciate you.

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     • In my appreciation, I can think of mechanics as many metaphors, but the rest comes from insight.

       • yes, that’s actually what i have in mind as well. they are not just the ordinary angels.

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         • In fact, you also have some angels as your twin sisters. Haha…

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5. This is new to me and I love the way it is presented.

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   • Thanks, sometimes I am a hopeless poet

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     • You are doing great.

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       • Thanks for this encouragement so I can write more haha

6. Unfortunately, I have never heard of a mechanical angel

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   • This is just an imagination.

7. I love your concept of a mechanical angel

   • thanks. I appreciate that. It is difficult to be a hopeless poetic. LOL

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     • it has to be better than being a soulless drone…

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       • Drone? hmm.. yeah I will make a poem from it. because I don’t like it, it seems like it is invading my privacy.

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         • Hold onto your privacy as best you can