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3 days journey in an open boat in search of the sun

not always open

as the rain falls around

the sailors on

the tiny craft.

A three-hour tour

now lost

amidst days not counted

hours left

in jars

on the banks of rivers

Is it open now?the lights flashing

the driver


the stop sign

and the lights


in a rhythm

close to the

sound of

a heart

locked in a dark room.

Is it open now?

  • Seems that Three-Hour tours are often a bad idea, right?

    • Yes
    • No


What do you think?

13 Points

Written by DocAndersen

One fan, One team and a long time dream Go Cubs!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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  1. Starting when I was in High School i wrote five different poems using the title. I don’t know why that title stuck with me. I love it.

    I actually never published this poem ever. This is the first time it has seen the light of day. I suspect in reading it, I should have left it in its dusty bin of forgotten poems!


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