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Poetry Request By Albert

Albert commented on this photo, and ask about why I didn’t write a poem, so here it is on short notice lol.

Sunset of Spooks

Look beyond the unknown

 through the key hole

of the night

Walk slowly toward the night 

It may bring

an allure of suspense

Invent your own story

But walk slowly 

and quietly shhhhh

making sure of what is in plain sight

A spooky sunset

may just having you running home lol

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17 Points

Written by LaJenna

16 Comments

  1. A unusual image which befits the poem. The poem no doubt has a greater effect. It’s an inspiring challenge with very little instructions, kinda like a fortune cookie that turns the direction of the audience to look inward for the next clue. Very nice!

  2. Five thumbs up after five +++++, LaJenna. I’m happy because you’ve granted my request, and secondly because this poem is very fun! I’m sure you didn’t write it while running home, right?

    My apology if I visit a bit late coz I have to wait for the atmosphere to be quieter to comment because I’m shy to appear after my name is written there.

  3. I’m usually bad with poems and reading between the lines
    but I do like this one!
    Its comprehensive for me … yet works well with the photo!