https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ATsmMBptA08
thE SHY GUy…
I’ve been checking you for a while now,
You know…
And er… I can’t help it
when I see you smile…
See I…I er…
I mus’ confess
I get so caught up with your finesse
That I lose sight
of all the things that I,
I need to address….
No intent to sound cheesy
or maybe a little corny
Its just, er…
just how I feel,
when I try to express!
My brain and tongue
gets twisted undressed!
No,
no, no….no!
I mean, I mean under duress
Yes, yes duress…see
Yeah, yes….stress duress
That’s it…aha…
Can we talk, or…er,
Can’t I just sing?
Copyright © 2018 Bradley M. Tremmil
I’ve been there before, can’t say I am in any hurry to return…
Just one of the many characters I’m writing about.
so far they’re all quite relatable
I still want to play around Sci-fi
it is an interesting genre- you can anticipate future issues or just gussy up past issues
How delightful are your words Bradley. I know how it is to be shy and want to approach someone. Love the little boy. Made me smile.
Thank you Carol. When I said to my music teacher that I want to write and compose but how and what would I write about. He said “if you can make a song usingf 2 chords then you can write anything”. Write life!
That is a lesson you will never forget.
Probably because the right side of his brain operates on a different level to his left side…
Cool poetry! But wait a minute… wait a minute…
if he is shy, why he prefers to sing rather than talk?