Bradley Tremmil
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THE RAIN…
The rain
Oh the rain
Water from up high
Like tears from the skies
up against the window pane,
The rain
How I love the rain…
Paradigms arrange
As do seasons change
Like a kaleidoscope of colour
In spectrum,
The world feels brand new…
The rain
Oh the rain
Reflections of her rainbow
Up against my window pane
Sunshine’s dazed in mist
When she calls
My poetry’s a-bliss…
Pour more
Caffeine’s into Jazz
Midnight till dawn
cruising the avenue
Adore more
Sweeter Honey’s creamer…
Oh the rain
Soaking wet the rain
Like a smile that beguiles
The rain,
How I do love
The rain…
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Copyright © 2018 Bradley M. Tremmil
I really do not like the rain when it’s needed for survival-beautiful poetry
Water, we need everyday. Rain is recycled water from the clouds. When it falls in moderation it is friendly and enjoyable. Thank you for enjoying my poetry.
Sometimes rain hides the tears from our eyes.
That is also very true. In that case it will be a good disguise. I just write a poem called ‘Tears from her eyes’. If I do just know that it was motivated by you…
Rain can refresh the mind and body in many ways\s I do believe. Awesome poetry!
Thank you so much Jenna. Your insight is right on the money!
I do not like rain because it has a bad influence on my feelings
Sorry to hear that. In my country. Rain itself for me is associated with blessings. Rain in my country is very precious right now because we are not having enough. Anything is possible maybe oneday you could have a change of heart.
So lovely!! I really enjoy the rain therefore I enjoyed your post as well!
Elena Bojchovska, maybe you should write a piece about ‘The Rain in Barcelona’ or Madrid or Servile
For the sake of the rain
that turn caffeine into Jazz
has attached charm
to the rainbow on the window glass
to dance again
entertain lovers.
Albert your eyes are blessed as the spectacles of a seer.
Rain in your words makes me see.
last post on fire, this one on water… will the next post be a sunset?
The heat is turning up this spring. Maybe fire & ice or perhaps icecream.
I see; you’re doing compliments, not elements
How beautiful Bradley. I absolutely love the rain. The smell. The sound. Sometimes it does feel like tears on my windowpane from the sky. Other times it is the most relaxing sound in the world.
Ever since I can remember the rain has always been some kinda magic to me. So many, many awesome moments.
do you like rains Bradley?
Yes I do Mavic. There’s a special kind of poetry which speaks of the romance in and out of this world. The secret’s interpreted through Jazz.