Bradley Tremmil
HEY BIRD…
Hey bird how doin’?
My name is…
But you can call me Mr. Bee,
What’s your name?
I’d like to know your name…
Hey Bird,
See accidentally
I wandered into this territory
Cos the weather’s kinda raging
on the path to my way home
And I, I just need a hang out
for a while until the storm subsides…
What I’ve seen so far
is that these parts are quite splendiferous,
But you already know that right? Yeah
Erm…I know we just met and all
And er…I was just wondering
if, if you wouldn’t mind taking me on a tour…
Yeah-yeah I know we just met
But I don’t know anybody here
And I really-really
don’t wanna tour by myself right,
If you go away now then,
then I might end up cold and lonely
That, that will be a crying shame…yeah
Yeah, that’s right.
Can’t you see electric eyes are everywhere
There’s a chance I could get violated
And that ain’t cool,
It’s just not right,
It just ain’t!
Are you mocking me?
Well quit that
Like Q.U.I.T. quit!
Alright, alright, alright…
Come on girl
You should know
My 1 and only friend up in here
is you. Only you,
So what you say?
Yeah,
Now that’s what talking about…
See you can show me your country
And at the same time
you can learn all about my domain.
You what I’m sayin’…
Do you mind if I sing?
Or hum, or something, while we buzz…
Hey Bird, check this out
‘Only you….
Copyright © 2018 Bradley M. Tremmil
A very cute poem inspired by the photo.
Thank you Barbara I may just continue with this story…
I was hooked from start to finish and now all I have to say WOW WOW WOW
Thank you Jenna. This was inspired by your challenge.
The photo caught my eye first of course. Love those hummingbirds and they like to catch little insects in the air. And the poem. Wow you have a way with words. Then the song Only You. Love The Platters, now I am singing that song. A good one thank you Bradley.
When I saw this picture, the story just started flowing out.
And the song Only You reminds me of my dad. It always puts a smile on my face. All the old romantic movies and music I learnt from my father.
What a great memory for the song… for you! Good stuff Bradley.
I feel a genuine desire for friendship in the difference, in this poem, on these lines of words which full of joy…
Would you like to sing now?
The first best thing we can do for ourselves is to be our own best friend. After we learn to treat ourselves with love and respect then next best thing we can do is make a friend outside of ourselves.
My brother you ought to know that I sing all the time everyday, no matter the mood. I learned to appreciate the gift of life through the gifts of art.
Everything you say is true!
About singing, I can even hear the melodious sound of your photos! Hehe…
Of enjoying life, there is nothing is more important than to appreciate the gift of life, through any means, but art is indeed flowing in our veins, and that is our commonality.