Bradley Tremmil
She’S POETRY…
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ldm9agMQ148
She’s poetry
when she smiles
She’s music to my words
Like a starlit dream
floating in a diamond midnight sky,
…
Tantalized by her eyes
I’m enchanted when she smiles
She’s brings the new dawn
with every morning sun,
Hypnotized so hypnotized
In my eyes
She’s poetry
She’s the laughter
when a million butterflies arise,
…
She’s poetry
when she smiles
We’re wearing golden tans
Like rolling sunsets on a beach
with golden sands
…
Poetry my floetry
She’s the colours on my canvas
Song of her heart
She breathes rhythm to my soul,
Jewels in session
Can’t you see how this thing is suave
We’re dancing in the rain
gleaming under the influence,
…
Heavenly to me
Like a pomegranate tree,
Poetry
She’s poetry
When she smiles…
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3vNFxZQjtj4
Copyright © 2020 Bradley M. Tremmil
Thank you for sharing that beautiful poem
You are most welcome. There is a lot more…
What a beautiful poem! Thank you
Thank you for your kind comment.
i like the mix of songwriting (music to my wors) and fruit (pomegranate) presenting the message in many formats.
well done!
Hmm…interesting…I like your vision.
just riffing along with the maestro – you lay the words I hear the dream!
Thank you Carol…it’s always more pleasant when it flows out 1st thing in the am.
You are so talented to have this gift of writing.
Thank you. It’s been many hours of practice consistently writing my thoughts through different styles with the magic of music.
Your poetry reads like a song. Beautiful. I also write poetry and I have published a poetry book on amazon.com.
Thank you for your comment. Be sure that I will check yours out.
The book I have on Amazon is called ‘Just Poetry’ if you are interested. Thank you.
Your poetry always is perfect from start to finish. I had to check it out when I saw this post in the latest, and it belonged to you. You always inspire me to write more poetry.
I hope that you write am much as you feel. Thank you!
You are a great poetry artist.
Thank you lacho…much appreciated.
Very beautiful poem…!
Thank you…I am glad that you like it.
Very welcome…Yes I do…
What a wonderful poem to read this morning Bradley. A nice flow to your words as always.
You paint a picture in my mind.