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NOW THAT SHE KNOWS #tbt

This was the original follow up to a piece I wrote in 2017 called ‘If she only knew’.

Just had to spice it up a little bit. #tbt. The Revamp version…Enjoy

NOW THAT SHE KNOWS  

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bu6dg4XuO14 

Back inside 

that smokey crowded room

Calypso Jazz with a Spanish twist

Out in the crowd

she sips on whatever

My endeavor,

Me up on the stage 

I say…

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0HL_8XRt5Xk 

‘Now that she knows,

I call her sunshine

Beach house near the sea

On a rainy night 

cozier at the fall of nighttime 

The wind chimes 

like a candle in the breeze

From the toes up

it’s better when it tingles…

 

Now that she knows

she calls me moonlight,

Guilty by the court of love

Her face in sight

my eyes they ga-low at night

Her and me all alone – perfect,

Baiting worth the waiting

Like a ship about to shore

She moves smoother

than a felon set to prize…

 

Now that she knows

blind folded we play,

In Braille

we hide and go seek

Surprise-surprise

what’s the prize?

The magic carpet ride…

Now that she knows,

we lift off up in there –

T-minus

den

wine 

mate

heaven

mix

dive

floor

me

you

one

zero,

Like a rocket to the moon

Up, up and away…

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KNazycdO_o4

Face to face

My place her space

We be like satellites

hovering out into space,

In fusion water flows

The perfect timing

In and out of rhyming,

Now that she knows

 

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