Bradley Tremmil
IN THE MEANTIME…
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nFQD11pp4Dw
Sonnet 1
Fuel to my fire
I’m your Bard
I’m your Poet
Even through the fire,
…
You are my love
with whom I’m in love
My love who I love
you are poetry to me,
We are coals
We are embers
We are One,
We are members entwined
since the womb of our soil,
…
I yearn for your soul
For the churning
as it burns up against the sun
All ears who hear
Truth is in our roots
Much it do what it do
from here to Timbuktu
I’m zipping up my boots
What about you?
…
Sonnet 2
Pay no mind to salt less seers
They don’t see us
When they school ya
They fool ya
They’re users who’ve whored us
No care for us
These hoarders never adored us,
Same ole same ole
Old wine skins
For themselves not for us
They bore us,
…
Don’t let them rule ya
Dry your eyes my peers
Fill your heart with song
Stay steady stay cool
All praises to the One
Let Yah rule,
Cooler than cool
Nice n’ spicy
We flipped the script
We pool our sauces
within our borders
No fear no
From a mountain high
Me I saw this,
The Payback –
I owe you nothing
You owe me something
700 years of misery
Plus all that glittery,
…
Sonnet 3
Foolish to mistake
my kindness for weakness
Just cos I love a hug
But when we switcheroo
the things we do
What rhymes with that
and sleekest of cats
…
In the meantime
Right where you are
Go be a learning
Not his or her story
No more lies
but our true story,
A journey to your past
Navigate with good intentions
The prize before your eyes
is worth the weight in glory,
…
Ari-Ari
I’m your Bard
I’m your Poet
You are my love who I love,
A new age wine
You are poetry to me…
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w458aTECqEk
Copyright © 2020 Bradley M. Tremmil
“Foolish to mistake
my kindness for weakness”
I love this part. Great work aa always!
Thank you Ellie. Much appreciated…
that one has a great rhythm as if a song is sung as the singer’s voice and energy rises and falls.
our true story is very powerful
Music is poetry in motion. Poetry without instruments is more powerful when the reader composes according to their genre.
Our story is truth when we choose not to be entertained by the magician’s mask.
it is really interesting – thanks! i enjoyed it!
You’re welcome my brother – Thank you!
you got it- love reading your poems!
Your song is beautiful. Happy is the one for whom it is intended.
Thank you for your kind comment.
Very beautifully written and I love the photos
Thank you Rasma. The photos speak for themselves a clear message.
My love, which I love, is my poetry. I want to say to this person to whom you dedicate these poems and sonatas, he is lucky and happy. Thank you my friend for the good moments that your work delivers.
Aah…much appreciated Elenka. And you are most welcome.
Be sure there will be more…
Thank you!!!
PS. I have 2 sons.
Needless to say this piece is multi faceted.
You are very talented. I wish I had a little bit of your talent to “work” with words.
If you want it you that bad then you must practice, practice, practice…
Thank you kindly!!
I read each of these several times and am always amazing at your flow. The video was different as well. Thank you for sharing your natural talent with us.
I am ecstatic that you feel this way. It means that I am doing my job well.
Thank you my friendo!!!
Absolutely. Always waiting for the next one. 🙂
For you my friend there will be more. You can take that to the bank!
Doing a happy dance over here.