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I decided to share another poem with you all today since I did not know what else to post. I hope you all like it. I wrote this one quite a few years ago when I was in a darker place in life.
Hidden in the Dark
You don’t know what is hidden in the dark,one tiny ember waiting to sparkUncontrollable fireYou don’t see what’s under this façade,just a jet black heart, stone cold hardFeeling no desire
It may look nice and pretty from afar,but here there are no moon and starsJust a hopeless sky
She paints on a smile and pretends,Puts on a charade and acts like she on the mend,but it is just another lie
When she is in the dark,She uncovers her secrets never toldIn reality there is no spark,Nor any gold…
You are fine with the editing.
The words are powerful.
Love your style of writing.
Thank you, I kept trying but it would keep going back to the lines being this way!
I appreciate your feedback, and am glad you like the poem 🙂
You are a talented poet, Mommy.
Amazingly, the darkness has passed, right?
Thank you, I wrote a whole book and self published it.
Since no one was buying it, I decided to just share some of them here
with my friends.
And true….it has.
So with poetry, not many people like it.
Hopefully, you always have beautiful days.
Very mysterious, romantic and philosophical poem!!! And this picture reflects the mood very well!!!
Thank you very much, glad you like it!
I accidently hit publish before it turned out how I wanted….the poem is not really in poem form. :/ Hope you all still like it.