Before you go about troubling your brain in reading I want you to laugh to full extent. Check this comedy literature par excellence:
AN EXPENSIVE DATE-A LAUGHING RIOT: BY: SHISHIR GUPTA
AN EXPENSIVE DATE-A LAUGHING RIOT-Volume I (Volume 1)
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This morning
was different
I got up
and opened my front door
walked slowly out
took the elevator
and then walked the porch
soon I was on road
I looked back
and thought
here is the SNAP
from that building
and all those who lived
in there
I am going for a CHANGE
and knows not where
a certain distance I walked
then took a lift
and reached a place
there I walked again
and reached a forest
therein I lived
for know not
how long
surviving on water
and eatables
warding off life
and then one day
someone came
and took me away
on a helicopter
to a unknown paradise
in another country
and from there
I went somewhere else
how to narrate any further
as I have lost the track !
FREEFLOW thoughts in FREEDOM
Nicely said and a beauty of a sunset to go along with your poem.